Feedback:
Teacher:
- Video doen't hold together.
- Include Band Footage (To include cutaways)
- Shoot in other locations other an school
- Colour seems odd (jumper and grass makes it look too green)
- Singers are confident but the mise-en-scene is weak and lipsyncing is out. Make singers take it more seriously and not giggling. Make them sing so it looks like a performance.
- Too much walking round fields
- 1:25 - Unclear have zoomed too far
- 1:29 Blinds are open letting in light behind the singers.
